[Report This]Date: May 15 2013 2:22 AM Title: Interlude - the view down there.
Great addition. I enjoy the micro POV. I hope to see more of it. Kinda bummed it may be until chapter 20 before I get more. I personally enjoy the crush aspects but I think you are doing well with the gentle. It gets old quick when a 10 mile tall woman battles micros. It's a slaughter. These accidental crushes and deaths are more fun LOL.
Of course being a foot fan I hope to see more barefoot or shoe crush but it's your story I'm not complaining or requesting.
Can't wait to see where you take it from here!!!
Author's Response: No worries - there will be crush. Keep in mind they barely got their zones... and I believe that empty crush/violence is meaningless and boring. I will try to squeeze some more pov in 9th - since I feel I owe some of what was missing in 5th. I assume You must have enjoyed the 2nd part of 5th chapter then? :)