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Reviewer: Chozo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2013 12:50 AM Title: Intro - how it all came about.

I read the intro as well. One thing I would like to nitpick about it was that 2,000 mile radius ship in the pacific that was sunk by blowing up some bombs. I think if anyone ever built something that large they would use compartmentalized hulls which could only be flooded in the damaged areas as opposed to the whole thing being sunk, because if you are going to build something that large it would be stupid not to take every precaution. Just my thoughts.



Author's Response:

Yes, I was not sture about this part for a minute - but the main thing is, that deep underwater nuclear detonations create significant pressure changes and with such scale plus water weight overhead - there will no materials able to stop flooding and hull tear, theoretically - and we are talking multi-megaton devices, which tend to generate a lot of energy, even if most of it escapes as gamma...
I also never said it was a single-compartment ship, just simply that if given enough time and effort, anything can be destroyed - for instance if most/all compartments get damaged - I just think somebody would have found a way with so many possibilities the assemblers give and it is hard if not impossible to protect against every single threat (that's why I'm also a bit scared for the future). Also - keep in mind that the ship was not yet complete (hmm, which part I may have missed in the description).
As for the logic and reason - at first I was going to describe a network of inter-connected undersea bases - but eventually went for a more "dramatic" approach - since it is not like it's a central point to the story or anything.

Besides - when was the last time anybody has seen a smart government? You know how the bureocracy works...

But I really do appreciate picking it up - it is the second least feasible thing that found its way into the intro, I believe ;)

Reviewer: microtopian Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2013 4:02 PM Title: Intro - how it all came about.

I think this start is fantastic. I love the background, and really look forward to you continuing! :)



Author's Response:

Ah, somebody actually read the intro - I was getting worried.
As for the continuation - no worries, it's coming - I am just trying to think a few chapters ahead to keep the story consistent, which tends to distract a bit.

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