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Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2013 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 6

the depth of build-up and length of enjoyable descriptive detail of the mouth play is something I've never (or rarely) been able to come up with in any of my lengthy novels.

You are truly an awe inspiring writer on this forum.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2013 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved the new chapter. The mouthplay scene was great. Susanna seems to have discovered her playful side. Why were her lips losing color though? Lipstick rubbing off?



Author's Response:

Good question.  It was a meant as an indicator of oxygen deprivation: her lips going pallor.  As she was merely holding her breath, I suppose it doesn't make perfect sense, other than that it might have it only seemed that way to Vincent as a result of his fears.  

Glad you liked the chapter, it was fun to write. ;)

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