Reviewer: Smushed Boy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2013 8:15 AM Title: Lisa true to her word

good one! keep going!

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2013 12:26 AM Title: Intro

Forgot to rate

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2013 12:25 AM Title: Lisa true to her word

Great chapter, wonder how emy eill survive and how much of a toy will she be?

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2013 2:22 AM Title: Lisa true to her word

Going swimmingly so far.

Reviewer: HarelequinEms Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2013 6:02 AM Title: Intro

Your english is certainly good enough for you not to worry too much about it. There were a few points in the chapters that didn't make sense the first time of reading them but it was easy enough to get your head round what they meant. Certainly you have a better grasp of english then some of the english speaking writers on this site!

The story was an interesting read, i really enjoyed the attitude Lisa had towards Emy and you've got some good development going on. Perhaps some slightly more in-depth detail with your descriptions would be good, but you have enough that it wouldn't be missed if it wasn't put in.

Keep up the good work :)

Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I thought I would use my bad english combined with low in depth description to make a more fast paced story. We'll see, I'm mostly writen towards where my imagination brings me to. 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2013 9:08 PM Title: Found by Lisa

Bravo good sir, bravo

Reviewer: UserDoesNotExist Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2013 10:04 AM Title: Intro

This is gonna go south so quickly. Though I object to the inclusion of a 10 year old as the person being tortured, I'm also curious.

I love to hate the world these stories exist in. I liked it more when it was a universal deal as with the Insole Girl, but it's also interesting when it isn't such as A Little Blackmail.

I'm really curious, and am looking forward to this. Especially with Lisa.

Reviewer: Ace of Spades Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2013 9:59 PM Title: Intro

keep writing ^^