Reviews For Scribal Error
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Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2023 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

(Resubmitting because I accidentally rated it low?) 


I’ve been missing this story for years. I read it once when it was newly published ten years ago, and couldn’t find it again when I tried to just a few years back. Stumbling upon it again was an amazing delight. Very stirring work! 

Reviewer: Vanessa_S Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2019 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

OH MY GOSH! That's the greatest, I'd never imagined this sort of willing vore plus unwilling digestion! You're way creative!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much.  I'm sorry I didn't reply sooner. I've been away from the site for some time. 

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2013 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love satire like this! Scribal Error? A reference to me?

I used to have some of my time stories posted as "The Time's Mite Zone" and later "The Timescribe Zone", before I moved their content elsewhere and reused it.

Very clever, with homages to everything you could think of. I'm touched.



Author's Response:

Yes indeed. I'm glad you liked it. I figured it was time I returned the favor, besides, I've been wanting to use that title for a long time.

Reviewer: 8cm50 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 16 2013 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very nice story, and to repeat it, very near Twilight Zone. I Guess I could watch it reading you !

Thanks for your work



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. Most of my stories end up being morality plays (which the Twilight Zone was) but this one was just too, um, zoney to ignore.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2013 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like the 'moral' to the story,  "Give him just what he wants"  pretty coool!

* P.S.  Did you write this in black-N-white?   Ha!  ;`)



Author's Response:

I was wondering the same thing, but I've decided it's in color, just because I want the redness of Grace's lips. Maybe that's all that's in color, like the dress in schindler's list.

Reviewer: girlfood Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2013 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great work. Very Twilight Zone.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I decided to add the narrator and make it Twilight Zone like because the moral and the change of the character felt like the old episodes.

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