Date: March 05 2013 7:08 PM Title: One Night Stand
Jus' to clarify what we have in common, which-(by the way) I'm not sorry for...
Tiny men- 4" to 6", with normal sized giantess... The overflowing imagination, the limitless fasination with the aspect of the G.T.S. story line.....
I never told another person, at all.......and sometimes even tryed to forget about it!
As you well know, you can't ,....thank-god for the internet!!!
Keep on writin' and dreamin'!!!
Date: March 04 2013 8:57 PM Title: One Night Stand
I like the 'Moral' to the story: " Be careful who you make a one night stand, because they may later keep you in one"
Very nice short story. I really enjoyed it. Jason knows in the back of his mind that this psyco-girl is going to get even, and his realization happens quickly....
This had all the parts arranged for a long exsquisite story! Why so short?
P.S. After reading your 'Bio.' It seems we have' alot', in common, I'll be adding you to my Fav's shortly,( need to read some more of your works first,.....Naw, jus' kiddin, Ha:)
As for getting kept in a "one night stand", you never know. It could happen. It happened to Jason. :)
Why is the story so short? Writing short stories is my style. The stories come to me. I just simply write them down. I have written two long stories (Displaced Anger and another yet to be posted) and it about killed me each time. "It burns us precious!" :) Both members of this site and my girlfriend have both encouraged me to write longer stories. My girlfriend complains that I create these relationships between protagonists, build up an interesting storyline, and then POW; the story is over. It's like I'm leaving the reader feeling undone. Sigh! I'll try. To prove it, the one I'm working on right now I'm custom writing it with chapters for the very first time. Wish me luck!
After mentioning about reading my Bio, I revisited it. Good thing...I found a typo. Thanks for mentioning it. :) I don't know whether to feel happy that I have something in common with someone pertaining to GTS or feel sorry for you because you have things in common with me. :)
But enough about me. Let's talk about you. What do you think of me? lol
Thanks for the awesome review!
Date: March 04 2013 5:14 PM Title: One Night Stand
another good story deelann once again though I find myself jealous of your ability to write dialogue lol
anyways Keep up the good work
Thank you Amateur Wordsmith. I learned that dialog is critical. Not only does it place the reader deeper into the story, it lengthens the story. Each time someone speaks, you have to make a new paragraph; making the story longer. <--- A little trick of the trade. ;)
Date: March 04 2013 4:58 PM Title: One Night Stand
Absolutely hot. Maybe Tasha should have dominated/humilitated Pam more before killing her, but I get the point that a jealous and manic psycho won't waste more time than necessary with someone she wants to get rid of. Good thing Jason has more friends ;)
I think my favorite part of this first chapter is when they are "medium shrunk". The scene where Tasha pins Jason to the door with one hand and slaps Pam across the room with the other is, to me, the essence of this scenario. Perfect.
Thank you Horatio for taking time to write a lengthy review. It's always good to hear a reader's favorite part. As you review, keep doing that for the authors. As for Jason having more friends...he won't for long. ;)
Date: March 04 2013 4:09 PM Title: One Night Stand
Wow, another beautifully brutal story by one of my favorite authors, Deelann. Hope you're still thinking about continuing "That Should Have Been Me" or whatever the exact title is called.
Still, I love this story, it's so...beautiful.
I haven't forgot about "That Should Have Been Me". I already have an idea for it. The story is writing itself. I'm working on a story now but I'll go back to that one when I get done. In the mean time, I'm just posting prewritten stories. I noticed that you've read and reviewed every story except Displaced Anger. I have requests to continue that one too. The ending is blah but it was written in a way that allows me to continue. Check it out and let me know what you think.