[Report This]Date: October 17 2013 5:36 PM Title: Unfair Fate
I have to admit this is the farthest I've got. mainly because I'm afraid to read the ending. I took a sneak peek so I can guess whats going to happen but because it's so different I'm afraid I'll either love it or be mildy surprised at the ending. If I love I'll never get a chance for this type of suspense again and if dont like it then well I still lose the suspense.
The same thing happened with Cayce's story. It's been almost ten years since i first started reading it and I still havent finished the last 5 chapters because I dont ever want it to end.
but so far you've done a great job up to this point in the story!
Author's Response:
I completely understand and respect your decision. In fact I am honored by your choice, It makes me feel confident as an author to know that I could deliver a story so moving.
However I must inform you that I am considering the idea of giving this story a sequel, but that is a long way off from now. Even so I thought i'd give you a heads up.
Thanks again for your support Mr E.
[Report This]Date: June 26 2013 10:24 AM Title: Unfair Fate
Hmmmmm! By this point, I think Josh is probably realizing that the opposite of under-achiever isn't necessarily being an over-achiever. That's it's possible (if rare) to become a plain old, reasonably contented regular achiever.
Author's Response:
Interesting comment. I will take this into consideration.
I'm going to try my best to give this story a proper end so that the sequal can have a proper start
[Report This]Date: June 10 2013 7:31 PM Title: Unfair Fate
Great story going strong!
Author's Response:
You bet I will. Some of my favorite characters are here I can't stop now
[Report This]Date: June 10 2013 7:20 AM Title: Unfair Fate
I can't honestly say I enjoyed the ending. Because, there was no clear moral like at the end of a TWILIGHT ZONE: TOS episode. Unless, the moral was it sucked to be Josh. If so, he might as well have stayed normal-sized, because that was obvious from his introduction in chapter 1.
In short; a bit of a disappointing anti-climax.
Author's Response:
This is a legitimate criticism and one that I am interested in fixing, but first I want to let you know that this chapter wasn't the ending.
That being said, you are right. There was no clear moral being presented. (as far as I could gather from re-reading the entire story.)
I had planned for the message to be something about friendship seeing as I mention it in almost every chapter, but I'm a little unsure of what I should say. The best message I can think of is "choose your friends wisely, as its possible they may not be your friends at all."
Maybe you can help me out Carycomic. If you have an idea for what the main moral of the story should be leave a review for me and I'll get back to you when I can.
[Report This]Date: June 09 2013 9:26 PM Title: Unfair Fate
Me Me Me I follow this story every update. Shit I wished u posted more lol. I hate waiting for the good stories to update, but I still wait patiently.
Im incredibly interested to read whts next. hope u update soon.
ps. I 100% love reading this story
Author's Response:
You have been one of my best supporters. Honestly without you and everyone else encouraging me I probably would have quit a long time ago. I would buy you a beer if I could. ;D