[Report This]Date: April 04 2013 9:37 PM Title: Unlikely Friendship
the detail you put into her socked feet and cleats was something I have not seen in a while. I love how he accepts being her pet and then starts to feel the pain of the risky decision he's hastily made.
Whatever your plans are for the future I look forward to them.
Author's Response:
Thank you Mr E for commenting I have always been a huge fan of soccer girls particularly the destructive power of their feet, so there will probably be more of that from Paige. And also I'm glad you caught my idea about his decision to become Paige's slave as well. But I can't say he doesn't deserve his punishment. After all he traded the little liberty he had left for a little security so he deserves neither. :D
Date: April 03 2013 4:54 PM Title: Unlikely Friendship
Sorry I misposted on Carycomics review I was meaning to say that the plot will continue on chapter 9.
Author's Response:
shut up Amateur Wordsmith you moron
[Report This]Date: April 03 2013 10:27 AM Title: Unlikely Friendship
The foot-fetish thing was a little off-putting. Because, personally, I don't find _anything_ erotic about b.o. (from any part of the anatomy)! But, at least Paige is being half-gentle.
See you @ chapter 8. :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you for being an excellent supporter Carycomic. I should probably warn you though that the first part of the next chapter is all bare feet so I'll put a warning in bold before it starts and after it ends so that people don't have to read me rambleing on about things they don't want to read.
And on a second note I'm going to start moving the plot along in chapter 8 so... yeah just figured i'd let everybody know that. I just need one more chapter to finish things up with Paige.
Date: April 03 2013 4:49 AM Title: Unlikely Friendship
Make it Nasty and sadistic
Author's Response:
Done and done
Date: April 03 2013 4:48 AM Title: Unlikely Friendship
Make it à little Nasty
And sadistic
Author's Response:
I think I have added a lot of nastyness expecially in the latest chapter and as for sadism don't worry Priya will return with a vengence.
[Report This]Date: April 03 2013 12:51 AM Title: Unlikely Friendship
I love and adore Paige so much.
Author's Response:
As do I. She has been one of my favorite characters to write I really feel like I portrayed her well and I'm definately going to bring her back in future chapters
[Report This]Date: April 02 2013 10:04 PM Title: Unlikely Friendship
Getting better! I'm still loving this story so much! Impressive descriptions and improved dialogue.
I chuckled when you added
"Psychological Drama next chapter"
Author's Response:
Thanks dudeman I'm glad to hear i'm doing better. I have learned to control my overactive imagination and only explain the most importaint details as opposed to earlier chapters.
Ah yes! about the psychological drama, I'm thinking about finally making Kevin fall down the crazy tree and hit all the branches on the way down
Author's Response:
Thanks dudeman I'm glad to hear i'm doing better. I have learned to control my overactive imagination and only explain the most importaint details as opposed to earlier chapters.
Ah yes! about the psychological drama, I'm thinking about finally making Kevin fall down the crazy tree and hit all the branches on the way down