Date: July 13 2013 6:09 PM Title: Prologue
This story is awesome, recently raed through it to finish.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it Gadget I hope I can count on your support for the sequel
Date: July 13 2013 12:39 AM Title: Prologue
i like the way you use descriptions, makes for an immmersive read.
Author's Response:
Thank you sizescribe I love being able to provide a vivid picture for the reader
[Report This]Date: July 06 2013 8:28 PM Title: Prologue
I like Angela the most. For varying reasons of course.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing again Dude.
Well Angela is likely to be the most well rounded of this stories characters I would say. Personally I think its only natural to like her considering the other girls are terrible in there own ways.
But I think I know why you like Angela in particular tee hee
[Report This]Date: June 09 2013 9:33 PM Title: Prologue
lol now that i saw gadgetmawombo's review he might like this story a little more than me lol.
now I know why Priya is such a bitch, but Angela remains a mystery to me. Im looking forward to whts nxt
Author's Response:
Angela's motives are a lot different than Priya's I can tell you that. Mainly because
Priya never saw Josh as a person. she only pretended to be his friend when he was normal sized.
Angela on the other hand actually hade affection for Josh. For reasons I can't explain now.
Date: June 09 2013 9:09 PM Title: Prologue
Dont think that nobody is interested cuz I am VERY interesting in this story...I WANNA KNOW WHY KEVIN/JOSH'S GENES ARE A THREAT, AND I WANNA KNOW NAO!!! *huff* *puff* *wheeze* Im sorry about that...Im done.
Author's Response:
Such enthusiasm!
anyways I can't quite reveal that information yet, but rest assured it's going to show up either in an upcoming chapter or the sequal to this story.
[Report This]Date: April 03 2013 1:12 AM Title: Prologue
I love how paige doesn't even have to threaten him she just is really, really persuasive..
Author's Response:
Thats one of her best qualities, rather than threatening Kevin when he disagrees she instead uses kindness and patience in addition to her physical power to mentally dominate and manipulate him into a position of submission.
[Report This]Date: April 02 2013 9:13 PM Title: Prologue
Most of this isn't very erotic for me, I really don't care for feet. My tastes lie more in butt, insertion and breasts. The chapter with Priya was really good. I prefer the dominant aspects, but the past relationship with angela is interesting. I'll definatly keep reading to find out whats actually going on because it's bugging me, lol.
Author's Response:
I totally understand your sentiment and don't worry future chapters will have a greater diversity of erotic material including insertion and breasts. Also you reminded me that I have not included any butt material yet so I'll get into it in the next erotic part.
As for Angela she's not going anywhere and will return back into the story shortly
Date: April 02 2013 8:05 PM Title: Prologue
Not bad at all. You have some detailed descriptions during the "action" scenes that are quite effective and your dialogue for the most part works very well. The introduction of different giantesses gives it nice variety. There are a smattering of technical errors I found in terms of grammar and punctuation, particularly in your early chapters that I think you could probably go back and clean up with some revision, but it's not a huge issue. Keep it up, I like what you've got here so far.
Author's Response:
Well thank you very much Jacksmith I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Also I do plan on re-writting the first two chapters and the prologue once I finish up some things in later chapters.
[Report This]Date: April 01 2013 4:23 AM Title: Prologue
This is a good story although I REALLY wanna know whats going on, so yeah...I kinda want to know more than any sexy stuff, truly your mystery is good enough to drive me nuts everytime I read a new chapter without any info. Keep it up, I can safely say I'm hooked.
Author's Response:
Thanks for commenting Gadget. And rest easy as I now have a good idea as to where I want to take this series so expect the plot to finally arrive.
[Report This]Date: March 18 2013 4:03 PM Title: Prologue
Realized I hadn't reviewed yet.
So anyway, I'm really liking Josh's character. (He's gonna remain Josh to me. The name they start with is the name that sticks with me.)
And if you said a lot of more girl's are going to be introduced then hey, keep em' coming!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing again Dudemanguy your one of my best supporters.
Also I'm working on several characters mostly high school and college aged, but I think what this story needs is a MILF perhaps a teacher or a parent. Maybe Angela's mother?
When I write the giantesses the thing is though (I'm posting this so that people can see part of my writing style and perhaps tell me whether its a good thing or not or even borrow it themselves) I start by selecting two or more emotions or sensations that will color the characters interactions with them.
Angela= glorious and dreamlike.
Priya= Exotic and dangerous.
Paige= Friendly and passively dominant.
sorry for putting that plug into the reply I just wanted to tell somebody that
Date: March 18 2013 12:36 AM Title: Prologue
I like the story but im waiting to read why they shrunk him. I understand why u have not shared that info and im not trying to rush u at all. Im just not a fan of giantess bitches. I am looking forward to the feet ch.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry about keeping info a secret its just that this is part of a larger series and I havn't fully planned out where this story fits into it. that and the suspense makes the main characters dive into insanity have more of an impact. I want the reader to discover as he does whats going on.
But since you have been such a loyal fan I shall spoil some thing for you.
Angela and Paige are not bitches what they are doing is for a greater cause, and they hold no negative feelings towards the main character. As for Priya... well yeah she's a bitch, but she isn't a bitch for the sake of being one she has a reason, a really screwed up reason, but still a reason.
Date: March 18 2013 12:02 AM Title: Prologue
Not bad, not bad at all.
Author's Response:
I suppose that not bad is at least somewhat good :D
Date: March 08 2013 2:40 PM Title: Prologue
Well I read it and now I really dont like them at all. Its fun till kill, thats twisted
Author's Response:
Im not really sure what you mean but I guess you trying to say you don't like the fact that somebody died and if thats the case I apologize but thats the direction this story is taking. but if this is about Josh then I should inform you that he's alive and well, the person who died in the prologue is not the Josh/ kevin of later chapters.