[Report This]Date: March 18 2013 10:18 AM Title: A New Goddess A New Experience
*Postpones reviewing to drink some ICE water.*
Author's Response:
*Prepares for review with great anticipation*
Date: March 08 2013 10:39 AM Title: A New Goddess A New Experience
I didn't think it was very believable that she would suddenly put him in her mouth after only just meeting him. I thought she would have asked him how she got there and there would be more about how Josh got to where he is.
Author's Response:
In addition to adding a prologue I could go back and add a few dialogue lines to help make it seem more realistic, also she's not really meeting him for the first time and I probably shouldn't reveal this but she knows who he is and why he was shrunk.
Thanks again for providing me with your support I will definitely consider what you have told me and try and improve in the future, also I need to know if my erotic scenes are good or not could you get back to me on that one.
[Report This]Date: March 04 2013 8:55 PM Title: A New Goddess A New Experience
Dear goodness this story is somehow reaching me like no story ever has before. Please, PLEASE continue this! I cannot wait to see how far his sanity is stretched, before he either makes them recognize him, or he breaks, utterly, entering in the realm of the insane, from which nobody has ever returned the same person.
Author's Response:
Oh believe me I fully intend to. Josh or Kevin as he is going by now will not have a single sane thought left in his head as he is slowly molded into the perfect slave by a number of people (I don't intend to stop with just Angela and Priya) there will be other goddesses to explore and there will be blood :)