Reviewer: Dezembek Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24 2013 11:26 PM Title: The awkening

I'd like it to remain unaware, good start looking forward to seeing where you go with it

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review,I was trying to figure ot how small to make Jake. I want him to be very small as to keep his whereabouts a mystery to both his mother and himself. Unaware stories fascinate me,and the only true way I can believe in them is if one of the characters is miniscule.