Date: February 22 2013 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
In reply to your reponse to my previous review, it's your story and you really like feet I take it, so as a reader I shouldn't complain to much because others like this. I feel that I could make a handbag scenario fun, but as I said you like different things to me. I actually felt the story was fairly believable up to the point he went into her shoe.
Author's Response:
I'm partial to the odd foot here and there. Fair enough, each to his own.
[Report This]Date: February 21 2013 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
Charles looks pretty screwed. That's a fair evaluation of their situation. Or maybe not. What i'm looking forward to is Tanya's reaction. Should be fun. You're doing good for a first time story.
Author's Response:
On the surface of things he does indeed. But who knows what will happen. Thank you very much, and thanks for taking time to review, means a lot.
Date: February 21 2013 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh and my prediction: Charles get's taken captive and is forced into selling the company to the Chinese. Tanya she's a figure run off with her bag and chases him down. From then on, no idea.
Author's Response:
Bit obvious no? My idea I think is a little bit more, complex should we say.. ;-)
[Report This]Date: February 21 2013 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 9
Cracking chapter, you don't how long I've had to wait, was tempted to write a review of complaint, but it was too good a story to ruin. Really liking the way you've set the platforms of this story, for your first time this is going well. Another positive is you're staying to the plot, unlike some authors who have great idea's but then get carried away and go off on a tangent. Particularly liked the reference to her weight and the car scene, adds detail. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Haha I know it has been a while and will try to get a rhythm going, I've just had a lot on in the past couple of days. Thanks very much glad you're enjoying it.