Date: February 06 2013 9:59 AM Title: Wednesday, September 19, 2012/ Wednesday, August 15, 2012, Day 35/Day 1
You gotta put some more into your descriptions, you never even established how Stacy looks.
When doing crush, you should describe texture, impulse, and emotions as often as possible. Take your time, don't rush situations. Give people their chance at dialogue, especially the giant in the situation.
Good start, though.
Date: February 04 2013 7:07 AM Title: Thursday, August 16, 2012, Day 2
An interesting start, looking forward to watching the story develop!
I noticed you mention animal involvement in the first chapter. Please warn us before that so I can skip it please! Everything else is fine!