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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16 2013 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 6

I'm sure Nicole is nice person but I am thinking Tyle does have second thoughts. And what will the people at work think if he's not there? Or his family? Nicole can't get away with what she is doing for too long, however much Tyle likes it.



Author's Response:

That's a very good point actually, I'm just not sure how much I really want to get into the "getting away with it" side of things.  If I can work something in without taking focus away from the rest of the story I will definitely try.  Thanks for your reviews and input.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2013 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 6

Suitably tender cliff-hanger. :-)

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