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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2013 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 3

Wouldn't there be ruins to the old way of life? It does seem a bit odd how people shrunk but there was no technology to grow them back. And a trip to the moon is mentioned so that means there are humans not present on Earth who would not have been affected by the shrinking.I think they should have been important to the story and the development of humanity. I think I'm being very pedantic. It's a good story obviously, but I feel as if I have to mention these things.



Author's Response:

There was never any technology to grow them back, it's a one-way effect. As to the humans not on Earth who may or may not exist, you'll know when Katie does.

Reviewer: ltltb Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2013 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 3

"Finding nothing, I resorted to rubbing her gently against the fabric of my top. Sure, it would get dirty, but I didn’t plan on wearing it much longer anyway."

Foreshadowing perhaps? Can't help but notice that she keeps thinking of males the size of her finger, in spite of herself! :)

 

Seriously, one gets the feeling she'll soon take a more proactive role in how this society runs...

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