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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2013 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

I can sense a lot of emotion in this chapter. it feels more believable than other stoires I've read, except I don't understand why they'd want to build tenples. Given the rapidly increasing amout of irrelgious people today you'd think a future society would be free from superstion but maybe clinging on to existing religions and not a new one.



Author's Response:

Those temples were built by the ancestors of the people in the story (She's been asleep for that long). The people she is with now don't think she's a god anymore. Also, society has pretty much started from scratch, and most of today's religions are long gone, though some small bits remain.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2013 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting concept! Almost like a sci-fi Gulliver's Travels. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.



Author's Response:

I think you'll enjoy it ;) I might actually mention Gulliver's Travels at some point in the story.

Reviewer: ltltb Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2013 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Extending the author's plot hint, of course, I suspect the readership here wouldn't mind if the giant girl tore ALL her clothes up to give to the freezing tinies!



Author's Response:

That might be taking it to far, lol! She'd freeze to death herself then.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2013 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

Remarkable chapter, Malaka. This story is really getting good.

aaron

Author's Response:

Let's hope it get's even better!

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 27 2013 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

 

Love it. I didn't know wht to expect but this seems real good

Reviewer: pasret4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 27 2013 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Alright!! Another great story by Malaka!! : D  This setting seems real interesting; I cannot wait to read more chapters!! Keep the chapters coming!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'll try my best!

Reviewer: Quicksilver Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

I bet the men of this tiny society decided to tear those warmer clothes up a long time ago, explaining that they could provide garments for thousands their size.  Well, that was the excuse they gave, at least--I'm sure they didn't mind the fact that if their goddess ever woke up, she'd be stepping over them in a miniskirt.



Author's Response:

Haha, that's a great theory! But while looking up a giant girl's skirt may be easy, she probably won't be pleased when she finds out you did it. Anyway, while they didn't actually taer up her spare clothes, it may be something she decides to do later hersefl, for the reason you just mentioned.

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