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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2018 2:09 AM Title: Prologue

Super cool plot. I greatly enjoy your writing.

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: DontHaveAPenName Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2015 11:27 PM Title: Prologue

Are you gonna continue this or not when I devote more then 2 hours of my life reading a story like this expect a continuation and if you're currently working on it then I hope it's gonna be good

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2015 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loving this story. Well done and very interesting.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2015 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 6

Very enjoyable. Looking forward to seeing her using her size more. Maybe stepping on some people or saving them from a cat. Is it possible that maybe her mother also got into a chamber? Maybe she would decide to rule over the little people and accept their worship. Nice story so far.

Reviewer: tank Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19 2013 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 6

wish you continue the story

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2013 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 6

Glad to see this isn't actually the end. Hopefully we will find out more about extraterrestial humans and other survivors...



Author's Response:

There are so many things I could write about in the sequels, so I hope I find time to cover it all. I think I'll focus on other survivors first, and leave any offworld humans for a possible future story.

Reviewer: Wholia Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2013 3:47 PM Title: Prologue

Hallo:

I just want to say that I think your story is fantastic. The main character is really likeable and the whole setting is very interesting. I'm looking forwards to the next one. Good luck and congratulations.

Wholia.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot, I'm happy that you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: ltltb Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2013 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 6

Sorry to see this story end, hope there are others with Katie. She's destined to lead these tiny people... most of them accept her so readily, especially the younger people. Hopefully they will be able to build their lives around her protection and devotion.



Author's Response:

That would be the best way for things to turn out, so, since I'm a hopeless devotee to happy endings, that'll probably be the direction I'll be going in!

Reviewer: alee Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2013 3:11 AM Title: Prologue

I kinda wonder if there is a situation where a guy who has survived from the war back in katie's time pops up just like katie did in this worrld that she is now. ANd that guy was shrunk but he managed to get away from the enemy.......(just a thought)

But hey its a BRILLIANT story, i have read yr previous ones and same compliment goes to them as well. PUHLEEZZZZ update this story SOONNNN



Author's Response:

Sorry it's taking so long to update, but it's been a busy few weeks. Next chapter's almost finished, though. As for the shrunken guy from the past idea, that's actually an idea I have for a future story, so you may see it someday ;-)

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 5

This was by far the best chapter (or at least the sexiest). Loved all the lake antics.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I figured there has to be some fetish content, even if it's not much, so I thought this must be the right chapter for it.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2013 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 5

That was wonderful. Hopefully al of the elders will be accepting of her.



Author's Response:

They won't all be, but she'll find a way to convince them!

Reviewer: pasret4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2013 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 5

Another great chapter, this story is going great, keep up the good work!!

Reviewer: ltltb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2013 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 5

A phenomenal chapter. Of course, they don't have to end up fighting over her. One could say there's plenty to share.



Author's Response:

But she might not feel comfortable about that...still, it's an idea.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2013 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 4

Great chapter. Ishiloo, wonder if it's some weird type of fallout creature or just a Goanna? You paint the picture of this world so well. Can't wait for more.

aaron

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21 2013 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 4

Somehow doubt the people wll cme with pickforks and torches. I think they'd be too scared. Well they might be brave enough...



Author's Response:

Katie was just joking. They're not going to try and attack her, they couldn't possibly even hurt her.

Reviewer: ltltb Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2013 4:04 PM Title: Prologue

Sounds like the mid-Atlantic states acquired their version of an alligator. To paraphrase a saying about gators and dogs, "Do you love your little human? So does that ishiloo!" few more victories like these and she'll soon have an army of worshippers and can start her own community if she likes. She's really even-keeled for the situations she's finding herself in.



Author's Response:

Yup, and she's got a long way left to go before this is over.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2013 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh my. A hundred foot girl in a bikini going for a swim with some tiny guys. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Nice to finally learn what an ishiloo is. The mutated wildlife is an interesting detail.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2013 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 3

Wouldn't there be ruins to the old way of life? It does seem a bit odd how people shrunk but there was no technology to grow them back. And a trip to the moon is mentioned so that means there are humans not present on Earth who would not have been affected by the shrinking.I think they should have been important to the story and the development of humanity. I think I'm being very pedantic. It's a good story obviously, but I feel as if I have to mention these things.



Author's Response:

There was never any technology to grow them back, it's a one-way effect. As to the humans not on Earth who may or may not exist, you'll know when Katie does.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2013 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 2

The description in thIs is really very good. I'm pratically in awe of this story.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2013 12:05 AM Title: Prologue

Simply exsqusite writing!  I'm going to read all of your storys!  (just discovered you today(Ha,heh) 

All I can say is,....WOW!  



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'd like to hear what you think of some of my old stories as well, after you've read them.

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