Reviewer: zol Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 5

Finally an update to my favorite story right now in here!! I thought you had abandoned it, so yay :) The chapter was the best so far. I just loved this part:

Rachel let out a bitter laugh, “You should have paid more attention in science.  There’s only 2 ways out.  The first is from where you just came from.  The second would be below you.”

“You mean out her… butt? Ewwwww.”

“God your dense!” Rachel shouted in anger as her voice grew closer and closer.  “We’re going to be digested and then crapped out of her ass!”

Just the way of irony and sarcasm I love the most in stories, really great. Im really curious on what you had in mind for the upcoming next. And I hope you will continue on the story soon :) Keup up the fantastic unaware shrinking stories.