[Report This]Date: January 09 2013 9:06 PM Title: Day 5
I'm starting to dig Serine but sue kind of took a bit of a bad but not -bad- turn towards the end.
Still excellent read and if I'm pulling for anyone it's likely her.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: January 09 2013 4:24 PM Title: Day 5
Story is getting better. I like how the chapters got longer and longer.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks! From here on out, each days will be broken into two or more chapters because I don't want to go more than about 10 MS Word pages per chapter.
Date: January 08 2013 11:20 AM Title: Day 1
Excelent ! Continue =) I love your show ! ^^
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: January 08 2013 9:40 AM Title: Day 1
I've been wanting to review this story for a while and should have done so! It started out slow but from the get go I loved the premise and found the characters really well done. As the chapters went on I loved how every character seemed to develop their own different personality and thats something alot of stories fail. The interactions between people and the realistic raltionships is just amazing and its honestly the reason why I'm following your story almost religously!
Onto more positives! As the chapters have gone to I love the character development. Slowly seeing both Dave and Sheri enjoying this power they have but wanting to hide this from others. I really want to see how the relationships develop and who ends up dominating who. Its nice to see tinies also having different outlooks. Cameron being a bit shy and nervous compared to Bill who actually seems to love it. Its very cool.
Onto what I hope to see! I'm generally a cruel fan and would love to see a bit of cruetly and domination in there. Of course anything too rough such as killing would be out of the question but maybe the game allows for entrapment and some form of abuse as it was they signed in for? Sorry I just love cruetly and advocate it wherever possible!!!
The only negative I have for the story is how the relationship between Sheri and Tom happened. I felt it was a bit sudden and considering she was lusting after Cameron just before was a bit WTF? for me. Just seemed a bit sudden is all. Still loving it though!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it so far! Yes, at first I was just "stretching my legs" so to speek and it took a few chapters for me to really get into writing this. As far as cruelty, I don't want to spoil anything but you might like some things that are coming up in a few chapters! And yes, I know the relationships in this story can change rapidly and don't always make a lot of sense. Most of these characters tend to be a little fickle with their romantic interests.
Date: January 08 2013 8:57 AM Title: Day 1
Can't wait for part 5,6,7... :D
Author's Response:
Thank you! They'll be coming shortly! (Har har, shortly)
[Report This]Date: January 08 2013 5:35 AM Title: Day 4
Still enjoy this greatly.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: January 07 2013 6:15 AM Title: Day 3
This I would watch...as-long as Jeff Probst didn't host.
Author's Response:
lol, don't worry he's not here.
Date: January 07 2013 1:51 AM Title: Day 1
Will you upload new chapters daily? Can I suggest you to shrink more males instead of women? Anyway I'm italian, now your story is international :D
Author's Response:
I will try to upload new chapters each day (or possibly every other day) until it's all uploaded. I am into both GTS and SW, but I prefer GTS far more, so there's going to be quite a bit more F/m and F/f than M/f.
Date: January 06 2013 4:09 PM Title: Day 1
Ack sorry about all the spam reviews, my computer glitches up and posted it like 5 times haha
Author's Response:
LOL It's alright. I got excited for a moment when my review count jumped from 2 to 8! But no, the shrinking will not be entirely random. There will be a combination of competition, games, and voting, along with random chance, to determine who gets shrunk!
[Report This]Date: January 06 2013 4:08 PM Title: Day 1
Great! Is it going to all be completely random, or will there be a level of competitiveness as to who gets shrunk and who stays big?
[Report This]Date: January 06 2013 4:08 PM Title: Day 1
Great! Is it going to all be completely random, or will there be a level of competitiveness as to who gets shrunk and who stays big?
[Report This]Date: January 06 2013 4:08 PM Title: Day 1
Great! Is it going to all be completely random, or will there be a level of competitiveness as to who gets shrunk and who stays big?
[Report This]Date: January 06 2013 4:08 PM Title: Day 1
Great! Is it going to all be completely random, or will there be a level of competitiveness as to who gets shrunk and who stays big?
Date: January 06 2013 4:07 PM Title: Day 1
Great! Is it going to all be completely random, or will there be a level of competitiveness as to who gets shrunk and who stays big?
Date: January 06 2013 2:35 PM Title: Day 1
I'm speechless. Please kepp posting :D
Author's Response:
Thank you, and yes I will keep on posting.
[Report This]Date: January 06 2013 2:06 PM Title: Day 2
So far the first canidate for my top ten of 2013.
Excellent start.
Author's Response:
Thank you!