Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2012 5:26 AM Title: Hitchhikers guide to Fantaria

I like the story so far. It's a nice idead, although I found the part about a new element rather unrealistic though I won't bore you with a chemistry lesson. I assume that isn't central to the story anyway, because you have the life form.

Author's Response:

Yeah, chemistry was never my strong point, I was more of a physics person. Glad you liked the first chapter. The element isnt really necessary to the story, its just gives a reason for them to be travelling a couple of light years away from Earth. Its good to see someone nit picking the science behind the story, i like that :)