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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2013 8:41 PM Title: Trouble

I think he's simply having a nightmare. Sort of like the whole 11th season of DALLAS: TOS!

Reviewer: Ghostbuster5 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 9:25 PM Title: Trouble

Dear Defright,

The first order on my agenda, is you replied? How kind of you! There needs to be a better system to know if someone did or not...

Two, oh my gosh! MAJOR plot twist! Poor guy. She grants his deepest desire... and betrays him. Now he is in the toe of a... government agent? Interregator? Either way, poor man.

Astonished Reader,

Ghostbuster5.

P.S. Wish I could dimension jump. I want to hold a rescue mission with videogame characters



Author's Response:

Always nice to reply to the reader showing that you care about the comments.  After I post a chapter I just wait untile the comment amount rises.  Sorry about not being able to post this weekend, was WAY TO BUSY!  As always thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2013 12:34 PM Title: Trouble

Very interested to see how this goes.

aaron

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2013 11:03 PM Title: Trouble

Oh ho! I like the twist this just went through. Some may not, but I say so. I expect Luke to hate Sophie now. Just an expectation. If they meet again I should think it to be interesting. 

A great chapter and a better improvement in spelling and grammar. You're improving Defright.



Author's Response: Thanks man, oh your just going have to wait and see for what happens next! Next chapter probably up on Sat. or Sun.

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