[Report This]Date: December 27 2012 10:38 PM Title: Perfect Little Sex Toy
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Great story.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2012 10:36 PM Title: No More Foreplay
Of course. He enjoys it.
Well, if your stepmom was beautiful, would you?
Answer this truly because I know I would.
(shamefully I would. Even if she was almost my real mother to me.)
[Report This]Date: December 27 2012 10:33 PM Title: No Arguing With Your Mother
Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
Yeah...
Go mom.
Author's Response:
Right? Got my foam #1 finger right here for her.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2012 10:31 PM Title: Plan B
Man, you know what would be awesome. If he could just will himself normal sized. Like the ladies can do to him but they shrink him. That would probably annoy the crap out of all the girls.
And it would make him totally awesome.
And the mom is a... I don't' have such a good word at the moment.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2012 10:27 PM Title: Unprepared
I think I like this story even better than your first one! What a mother to have!
[Report This]Date: December 27 2012 10:25 PM Title: Ready to Train!
Now its dat mom. I know what's going to happen!
[Report This]Date: December 27 2012 10:22 PM Title: His Two Best Buds
Dat friend... Visualizing stuff about my mom... I would PROBABLY kill him if I knew what he was thinking.
But I guess Steve goes through this everyday.
Once again, Bravo Steve.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2012 10:19 PM Title: In Need of Better Control
Ahh, sexual ummm, torture. For him it sucks because he shrinks! But he still loves them. I probably would have flipped my lid years ago if they did stuff like that.
Bravo Steve. Bravo
[Report This]Date: December 27 2012 10:16 PM Title: An Early Morning Prank
Just wanting to add stars since I've read this. Just because.
Don't question me.
Author's Response:
I PROCEED TO QUESTION YOU!!! :P
[Report This]Date: December 27 2012 10:13 PM Title: In the Morning
The same first few chapters... Is this like a different diversion? A what if this happened story? Or a, the parts I didn't tell you the first time story? Just have to read to find out.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2012 10:11 PM Title: Prologue
You know how I review. Every chapter. But I can't wait to see what comes in this story!
Date: December 16 2012 12:30 PM Title: Damage Report
Suggestion: A future training lesson should be a shrunk down Steve in the shower with a giantess and used like / or attached to a bar of soap. That would certainly test his self control. What do you think?
Author's Response:
That would certainly test my control, lol. It's definately a good idea and I don't doubt that is an aspect we would want to leave out, so I would safely say look forward to that ;)
[Report This]Date: December 13 2012 1:37 AM Title: Prologue
Very nice work here. I'm really enjoying this variation on the original. The two of you have a nicely developed set of fetish characters here that are cleverly balanced between scheming/sexy and kind/playful. Keep on going!
Author's Response:
I would go off on a tangent to buddhism about balance but to keep with brevity; thank you, we have been trying, and will continue to do so if our egos keep being fed :D
Date: December 12 2012 10:23 AM Title: A Mother's Dilemma
fucking awesome love this version
Author's Response:
Thanks! We've been working hard on it!
[Report This]Date: December 12 2012 2:36 AM Title: A Mother's Dilemma
Awesome story!
Always thought both your additions on writing.com were amazing. I'm glad you started your own story!
Author's Response:
Hah thanks bro! Us creepers gotta write eventually, right? You've got quite the amazing story going on over there, so I know I can speak for both of us when I say it's an honor, sir. And don't be afraid to drop by and add in a chapter or two on the story; would love to have some fresh ideas from a great writer such as yourself.
Date: December 12 2012 1:06 AM Title: Prologue
I don't know which story is better both equally good. one more of a story about his condition the other a sexual typhoon of incest lol
Author's Response:
Well since this isn't my story entirely, the correct answer is the original :P No, that's good that you like both of them for what they have to offer and we'll be sure to give you more here soon. And sexual typhoon of incest is a great description, lol. Thanks for the love!
[Report This]Date: December 12 2012 12:54 AM Title: A Mother's Dilemma
An excellent story!
I love the theme of a conflicted mother trying to protect her son, and yet finding herself giving in to uncontolled urges to go beyond what is neccessary. You two have done a great job in weaving the action elements between the retrospective emotions and thought process.
Author's Response:
Appreciate it! We are both enjoying the chance to work with each other and we seem to have a very united vision for how we want this unrealistic situation to unravel as realistically as possible while trying to be as sexy as possible. We are having a lot of fun with it, lol.
[Report This]Date: December 12 2012 12:43 AM Title: A Mother's Dilemma
DAMN.... thats all the praise u need lol
Author's Response:
Fair enough. We'll take that.