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Reviewer: arcticfreez Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2013 8:16 AM Title: Playing Rough

lovin the boob play

Author's Response:

Right? FTW

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2013 3:44 AM Title: Playing Rough

 

ugh, I know its a story but I always get pissed off. I mean its a good story but he dosent have to get shit on my his family all the time. I hate when they think their helping when all their doing is using him, its kind of sad. again good story thats just my take on the story so far



Author's Response:

I totally empathize, but to get the kind of action me and Chaos are looking for in just the right way, this was what we thought we be the best means of getting there.

 

Given its a fantasy erotica, we thought it held together pretty well so far, lol. I am glad that despite these frustrations, it is quite enjoyable. Don't worry, Steve's life get's easier.

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2013 12:14 AM Title: Playing Rough

Please continue this story!



Author's Response:

Please continue the Macho! More to come, we're just currently on hiatus with another project.

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 29 2012 1:26 AM Title: Playing Rough

I love where this one is going.
Please continue... 



Author's Response:

Oh we will, we're just on a little hiatus while we work on another project :D

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2012 11:31 PM Title: Playing Rough

Leave a review. I'd love too! 

Alison is such a great sister. She's being so kind to Steve

(sarcastic face off)

Man she's cold, no regret. That sister only wants to please herself, no doubt about it.



Author's Response:

Some true, some not. She's been desensitized to her brother's condition through the years and acts playfully with her brother accordingly, only now that everything is out in the open and he won't come completely clean with it, she's frustrated and proving the point/punishing him. She loves him, but she also wants to play with him and he's being stubborn!

I'm sure there are much better ways at being mean to a little guy then what she's doing :P

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