Date: December 28 2012 1:42 PM Title: Turn to Actions When Words Fail
I love the physical and psychological dominance that Alison displays over her brother. Steve knows that he is being manipulated, but is only able to respond with hopeless rage and trapped resignation. Excellent narrative, pace and creative details so far. I am also still looking forward to a chapter where Steve is used like a bar of soap by a giantess in the shower. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Me too, lol. When I thought up Alison's character, I wanted her role to be forcefully cheerful and playful without being any sort of sex fiend and Chaos digs her that way with the contrast it makes to Steve's mom Kady, which we like being the loving, well-intentioned but sexually craving figure. I swear there is a shower time to come, just wait for it! It's will happen, promise ;)
[Report This]Date: December 28 2012 8:43 AM Title: Turn to Actions When Words Fail
I can't help but think of Jacksmith's A Little Blackmail when I read this chapter. This is a really good chapter.
Author's Response:
That's saying a lot: Jacksmith's stuff is really well written! 'Preciate it! I know Chaos does too!
Date: December 28 2012 8:07 AM Title: Turn to Actions When Words Fail
more feet, and piss and poop!
Author's Response:
I can't gaurantee much feet, it's not really my thing, but I will put some in because I know it means a lot to a lot of other people. As to the piss and poop, I can dig it as long as I don't see a photo, I just don't want to saturate the story with too much of it, lol. There will be some chapters to come just for you sir. Promise.