Date: January 24 2013 3:08 PM Title: Little game
Agreed! Please don't forget about this story! We all REALLY love it, and REALLY want too see it continued! Please come back! Your writing is amazing, and I know I'd really really love to see the next chapter! This is by far one of the best stories I've ever read! <3
Date: January 20 2013 11:17 AM Title: Morning
This story is spectacular, and you can't even tell that English isn't your native language. I'm not usually a big fan of incest, but there's just something captivating about this story. Please keep at it, I can't get enough!
Date: January 18 2013 5:51 AM Title: Morning
Your English writing skills are better than that of most native English speakers, and your storyline is captivating. I'm eager to read more from you as soon as you can produce it, but please don't rush your creative process. I think you are doing a great job so far, and this is, without exaggeration, my absolute favorite gts read of all time.
I like that the sister teases the brother without being cruel/violent. I also like that the brother is annoyed some of the time, but still mostly a willing participant. I'm desperately hoping you'll include a vaginal insertion chapter.
Date: January 13 2013 1:47 AM Title: Little game
This is seriously one of my favorite stories. You are an extremely talented writer and I can't wait to see the next chapters! (Personally, I'm hoping she gets mad at him at some point and lets her evil side out a little bit...) :)
Date: January 11 2013 7:30 PM Title: Morning
I'm guessing you're bogged down by work/school, hopefully you'll pull through without losing your head. :)
The chapters you have here are really well done. Do you (or did you) have a larger story arc planned for this?
Also, guessing from some of the things I've read from you at writing.com I'm guessing where you are heading with this. If it is the case then I'm pretty excited for the future chapters. :D
Date: January 10 2013 9:03 PM Title: Morning
it's wondrous. I love the teasing. my one critique though is that you are spendign an awful lot of time with her mouth, and it gets boring after a bit. although the 9th chapter... hoo. wow. nice one.
please continue though, you really do have a gift and your english writings skills are improving by leaps and bounds.
Date: January 09 2013 7:16 AM Title: Little game
Let me start off by saying I LOVE this story! I love this story so much I registered just so I could review it. There is something about the dynamic of a sister taking control of an older brother that is ridiculously hot!
That being said please start up with the sexual stuff! I'm talking in between breast rides, panty rides, insertion, ass action, etc...
I've never been a huge crush/vore fan and this story is taking a turn towards the vore side that I'm finding disinteresting. The end of this most recent chapter showed a swing back which was great.
Still, you've got this powerful female character who's in control of her miniscule brother. Lets be honest - just like the penis is a symbol of male dominance a woman's breasts and vagina is her's - NOT her mouth. I realize it is some people's cup of tea but not mine.
Please keep up the great work!
Date: January 07 2013 10:35 PM Title: Little game
Absolutely epic all of it :)
I pretty much ended up reading this story from start to finish all in one night, I couldn't stop after one chapter it was just that good : D
Needless to say, I'm on the edge of my seat to read the next update when it finally arrives. And I know it took a fair number of chapters for any shrinking activities to actually arise and start in this story, I didn't even mind, whatever your writing style is,
'Build-up style'? It pretty much made the wait that much more exciting and compelling to read through. All the stuff that has happened and the events eluded to probably happen in the future of this story I enjoyed it all. Its great man :)
I know this is a lengthy and excessively possitive reveiw, I'm sorry about that. I'm pretty much trying to sum-up my oppinions for all 9 chapters that I just read through.
Hopefully my future reviews will be much shorter and more pleasant to read ^_^
Thanks for taking the time to review! Due to work, updates will come less frequently, but the next chapter should be up in one or two days.