Date: December 13 2012 3:00 AM Title: Goodbye
I've read through the story so far, and I think it's great! :) After the introductory author's notes, your exposition is subtle (which is the sweet spot as far as I'm concerned). Your English is excellent. If you hadn't stated that english is your second language, no one would have ever thought twice.
I especially enjoyed this chapter. Stan's growing nervousness is making me nervous about his future as well.
I'm also excited to learn about the "new features" included with the shrink ray.
Date: December 13 2012 2:15 AM Title: Goodbye
I'm not sure what you enjoy writing, but I certainly suggest you implement the "grain of salt" idea. Would love to see more ACTUAL "micro" on this site. I dont exactly believe 1 inch, or even 1 cm for that matter, should be considered micro. It's a shame that not that much X/R-rated micro is on this site. However, with all due respect, there's still at least 30% of the total content on this site that I have yet to view. Anyways my point is that so far, I've only come across a handful of noteworthy stories that involve the micro scale and have at least some provocative chapter or scene. My vote is not based off of whether you choose to go this route or not. I already love the story and it's just now starting to pick up!! Excellent job by the way. I cannot wait to read what you come up with next!
Date: December 12 2012 10:47 PM Title: Goodbye
Wow! What a start! This is extremely well-written, and you are doing an amazing job of whetting my appetite for more. The thought of her torturing tiny Stan under his mom's feet or in her ass without his mom's knowledge is awesome! I am really looking forward to more.
Date: December 12 2012 8:37 PM Title: Goodbye
I'm really enjoying Mia's character. A little sister who is a dominant tease but at the same time loving and caring. The paragraph where she explains her swimsuit was really arousing. I look forward to a lot more teasing, loving, and erotic stuff from her character.
Date: December 12 2012 7:25 PM Title: Goodbye
This is so great! I love giantess sisters and Butts!! And this story has both!!
You have a natrual talent to be a writer!! Keep it up, you will find yourself somewhere at the top later on XD
A seggestion!? uhmmm, I would like to see Mia would keep Stan as her buttplug when she doesn't need to play with him or use him.
Another seggestion, Is about the ending. I would love to see him stay forever as her sex toy. Also, you could add multible endings if have more than one ending in your mind. It is so rare to see stories like that.
Finally, I hate death. But I don't think you'll make Stan die, so it is OK.
That is it for me. Good luck! I can't wait to see chapter 5!!!
Date: December 11 2012 12:14 AM Title: Morning
This story is really interesting so far, I especially like all of Mia's teasing and the scene with the gummy bear being deposited in her panties.
Your English is pretty good and your writing is so far a lot better than a lot of stories I've read on this site.
I look forward to reading more of this and hope there are a lot of micro scenes!
Date: December 10 2012 1:17 PM Title: Morning
I hope to see some unaware interaction with the mother as well. Like being put in her underwear drawer and worn for the day, or stan being left in the shower and used by his mother (after his sister used him first of course).
Also I hope to see a shower scene in general.
Regardless if you decide to incorporate those ideas. you are doing a great job. Please continue with her teasing even after he shrinks.
Date: December 10 2012 12:57 PM Title: Morning
Loved it! Great turning point with the gummy bears and a delightful dive into the story being sexual without there being anything truly sexual yet between them. Excited to see more about how the summer goes and what she has in mind.