[Report This]Date: August 09 2015 6:53 AM Title: Glass prison
An absolutely fantastic story. Hoping that one day it might be continued on!
Date: February 15 2015 8:43 PM Title: Glass prison
This story is fantastic! Really great slow build up. I can't wait to see Stan get introduced to her butt - or better yet his mother's butt!
Date: May 01 2014 9:45 PM Title: Glass prison
THIS. STORY. IS. PERFECTION! Do you have plans on continuing it in the future? I would love to see how it expands.
Date: November 20 2013 4:26 AM Title: Glass prison
This is a great story, you really need to keep going.
Remember the 6 rules of storytelling:
1. Obviously enough, spelling and grammar. Horrible spelling and grammar will always cause a story to bomb.
2. Always start with a strong introduction paragraph and ending paragraph. Without them you run the risk of confusing the reader.
3. Get some time management skills to use your time wisely. Set a reminder to continue your story on something like your computer, IPAD, or Smart Phone, etc. So many stories here wind up unfinished and abandoned and there good stories, but the author either forgets about them or they just don't have the time. But those who don't have time do have time, they’re just not managing it well enough.
4. Never limit the number of chapters you are going to make, creativity cannot be limited even if it is only part one.
5. Stay consistent in your writing. In other words do not interrupt the flow of a story with a lot of jumping from area to the next or in your case, from one time period to another. Its ok once in a long while but don't do it constantly.
6. AND THE MOST IMPORTANT! KEEP YOUR CHARACTERS CONSISTANT. DO NOT CHANGE YOUR CHARACTERS PERSONALITY ON A WHIM OR JUST BECAUSE IT SUITS THE SITUATION. That's just disappointing and makes it so people don't want to read anymore.
Date: October 12 2013 11:18 PM Title: Glass prison
I have not given up on you. I still routinely check this site in hopes that you will complete another chapter. I appreciate the work you've done so far, and I'm hoping you will come back to it someday.
Date: July 02 2013 7:44 PM Title: Glass prison
Yougts,
Everyday i come to check if you've updated yet. I dont know if your being suspenseful or just need encouragement but I am absolutely dying to read the rest of this story, so pleaee update soon, youre al but killing me.
- The Toy
[Report This]Date: April 20 2013 6:30 PM Title: Glass prison
Loved the chapter. Hope to see more unwilingness from the brother. Like maybe he was starting to regret his decision and that his sister doesn't care anymore. Wither way it is a great story.
Date: April 19 2013 5:22 AM Title: Glass prison
amazing story. i hope there's some unaware interaction with the mother in future chapters
[Report This]Date: April 17 2013 7:12 PM Title: Glass prison
Great chapter, i like the idea with the glass dilbo and painting. Been a really long time, before reading the new chapter I reread the chapter "the box". I can't wait for the anal beads and all the other stuff. I really hope you post more often. I also have to agree with other reviewers, this is one of the best stories!