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Reviewer: Devoool Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2012 4:21 PM Title: Morning

Wow, 8 chapters so far... I really like the way this story is headitng to... And YES more butts are coming in this story. Best incest story ever!! I'm glad you are exist XD Thank you!

Reviewer: Lupe Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2012 9:18 AM Title: Morning

Awesome! Was hoping to see her accidentally swallow him :P If only he could somehow survive a full trip through her!

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 5:08 PM Title: Morning

Great as always. I like how his sister still is trying to take care of him but dominate him at the same time.

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2012 10:15 PM Title: Morning

I'm just commenting again to add more stars.

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2012 10:15 PM Title: Morning

Fantastic!

All the stars!

Reviewer: Brandon1122 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2012 9:38 PM Title: Morning

please add more of the mom, mainly involving her ass! :)

 

Reviewer: horatio Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2012 3:57 PM Title: Morning

As Tiniestofsparks said:

Any direction this story goes is golden

But if I may express a wish: I found it very cool when she told him something like "Maybe I make you the size of a toddler, so you can be my teddy bear". As much as I like small sizes, this seems to be the perfect compromise between "realistic" physical interaction and still total superiority of the girl at the same time. SO intriguing, please make a chapter about this some time :)

Reviewer: rhino2003 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2012 3:19 PM Title: Morning

Amazing story, I would also like to see some panty torture come into effect see Stan 

struggle to get out but to no avail.  

Reviewer: theniceguy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16 2012 8:59 PM Title: Morning

This is awesome. Best story I have read in a long time, can't wait for it all to start!

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2012 1:36 PM Title: Morning

Great as always. Hell, I could learn a lot from you about writing. This is an excellent story

Reviewer: horatio Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15 2012 10:04 PM Title: Morning

I'm glad I found the story just now that it already has 5 chapters ;) I loved the way she teased him in chapters 1-4.. so hot! Also, "incest"-stories often come over a bit creepy, maybe ugly, but you let none of that slide in. Great :)

I like that Mia shares her brother's fetish, or rather that hers is the perfect match for his. Hopefully she won't be cruel - a bit (or a hole big lot of) teasing is superb, but I also love the setting that this seems to be about siblings just experimenting, not one enslaving the other for the rest of his life.

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2012 10:39 PM Title: Morning

Spectacular stuff!

You are really one hell of a good writer. Keep up the excellence!

Reviewer: Max333 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2012 8:58 AM Title: Morning

Still amazing.

Make him become his sisters panty-slave !

Reviewer: grimehead Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2012 12:14 AM Title: Morning

This story is really interesting so far, I especially like all of Mia's teasing and the scene with the gummy bear being deposited in her panties.

 

Your English is pretty good and your writing is so far a lot better than a lot of stories I've read on this site.

 

I look forward to reading more of this and hope there are a lot of micro scenes!

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 10:16 PM Title: Morning

Awesomeness!

Anxiously awaiting for more...

Reviewer: LittlestGuy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 5:57 PM Title: Morning

loving the story so far.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 4:59 PM Title: Morning

Dear god, for a first story, this is excellent. I think you sir are awesome.

Reviewer: LilBinary Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 1:17 PM Title: Morning

Great Addition!

I hope to see some unaware interaction with the mother as well. Like being put in her underwear drawer and worn for the day, or stan being left in the shower and used by his mother (after his sister used him first of course).

Also I hope to see a shower scene in general.

Regardless if you decide to incorporate those ideas. you are doing a great job. Please continue with her teasing even after he shrinks.

Reviewer: sm7in Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 12:57 PM Title: Morning

Loved it! Great turning point with the gummy bears and a delightful dive into the story being sexual without there being anything truly sexual yet between them. Excited to see more about how the summer goes and what she has in mind.

Reviewer: voredom227 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 10:37 PM Title: Morning

Brilliant first chapter, really looking forwards to seeing what she actually does to him when he shrinks down.

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