Date: August 02 2018 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
A very nice story
would like to read more
[Report This]Date: December 09 2012 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
The stomach stepping scene alone was worth the read.
Very nice work.
Author's Response:
Thanks, that means a lot.
[Report This]Date: December 09 2012 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
An overly pampered young girl with this kind of power is something to be afraid of.
She probably only cares about her big brother that she loves very very much, which is something cute, I can feel that she would never harm or abuse him but she have no gentle feelings towards those who stand in her way or defy her. Just my opinion.
Big bro will have quite a difficult time raising his not so little and weak sister properly now that she discovered this immense power. And since everything that matters to him is her happiness, as he clearly sacrificed himself for her health, I wonder if he will really try to control her now only to be confronted by his worst enemy, the sad face of his little sister. I can't think that he can win against this one.
Author's Response:
"An overly pampered young girl with this kind of power is something to be afraid of."
Exactly! That's one of the biggest appeals for me in this fetish, not just a woman being large and powerful, but also that she's flawed or immature. Girls, especially younger ones, can be very cruel, but in real life they rarely have the ability (physically at least) to do anything too bad. It's scary and, of course, exciting.
She does love and care about her brother greatly, but she doesn't really know or understand how this all could make him feel. Heh, well, you'll see.
[Report This]Date: December 09 2012 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
NOOO! Im sorry but he gives into her way to easily. At the end of the ch he should have said "we need to talk". She needs discipline lol. going around beating girls up. Big bro has to communicate with her more.
ps sweat&tears? I like the story thx for update
Author's Response:
At the end of the chapter, they're still escaping from the scene of the crime. Both are overwhelmed by what happened and their new situation, and thus aren't going to have a talk just yet. Sorry if that didn't get across very well. The exchange at the end was a sort of strange catharsis in the moment. Big bro's smaller than he's ever been and feels oddly comforted in his sister's grasp, so he's not thinking entirely logically when he replies so simply like that. And of course, well, he can't be that much of a tough guy or the story wouldn't really work at all! He wouldn't admit to being a pushover, but his sis is reallly all he has.
Sweat & Tears is sort of on hold, but I promise I'll finish it. I don't want to work on it right now for a variety of reasons, but I want to to give it a continuation and ending it deserves. In the meantime I'm working on this story, and I have a few short (1 to 2 chapters only) ideas.
Thanks for reading!