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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 10:54 PM Title: Abigail

Ah another rebel young lady. It seems there is a bubbling issue here of the old guard ways vs the young fire.

 

Excellent read.



Author's Response:

Or, if you think of it another way, the new guard vs. the old tricks. Quickly realized that the categories I used in the last story don't have any meaning here: whether one is good or bad, or gentle or sadistic, it all comes out the same in a "dystopian" NWO scenario. Giving your character bad motives, or making them deliberately evil, isn't necessary, because in a bad world they're bound to pick up some of the ingrained practices of that world. Discrepancies or deficiencies of character can be explained away by: but you didn't consider the times they lived in. 

Now, when applied to a NWO giantess story, that makes the relationships 10x more interesting, at least for me. Some writers on this site know what I'm talking about, but others go on plugging away at the violent/gentle categories without realizing they're both unnecessary and ridiculous in many situations. 

Yes, a lot of little parodies in the last chapter, and not only of my own stories. But also there's this to remember: while the eponymous character of my earlier story might have had a personal, intergenerational grudge against her mother, she later became a leader in the society itself. 

Thanks for the review.

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