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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2014 9:36 AM Title: Introduction

This story is great. I love these characters. Hope to see it continued but if not I appreciate the fact that you posted this. Thank you.

aaron
PS I'm gonna check out your other stories

Reviewer: methodman Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 20 2014 12:08 PM Title: Emma

Wow amazing chapter! Emma is awesome and I love the interacting between characters of multiple sizes. I can't wait for more chapters.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 8:29 PM Title: The Prizefighter

Merridith found a pet, interesting plot twist.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2014 4:48 PM Title: Emma

An interesting turn of events.

Author's Response:

Lots of changes & developments coming up (it's hard in a fun way when you've got four strong, distinct personalities chatting together at once, or living together in the same house: Abigail, Chloe, Emma, and Meredith).

Working on other material at the moment, but I'll aim for at least a chapter a week with this one. I like where it's moving.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 1:48 AM Title: Painting

Great to see this back.

Reviewer: Chloe13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2014 7:07 PM Title: Introduction

Chloe is everywhere I guess...

 

Btw I like the story keep it up (:

 

-Chloe

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chloe

I now get the feeling Chloe might be -as- bad as Abby said she was.



Author's Response:

She definitely frightens me. I think of her as someone who's not quite as bad as Abby claims she is -- but as a good person who's been warped by her lifestyle, and her situation.

I've been trying to figure out the main difference between this story and Adela -- and the most important difference, I think, is that readers will find a hard time relating these characters to people in their own lives (i.e. teachers, friends, or in some cases even relatives). I'll just have to keep writing, though. I really hope this story won't die. It's better written than Adela, in any case. And the characters are much sharper in my mind. But I'm not sure how easy that important "relatedness" factor is going to be. Who can Chloe represent? Who can Abby? Or Emma? Does it matter? I'm still trying to find out, as I go deeper into the story.

Reviewer: ogilthorpe Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2013 12:24 AM Title: Introduction

welcome back



Author's Response:

Happy to be back. 

Thanks for reading, also.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2013 7:10 PM Title: Freedom

I kind of feel for Meri but damn her indecisiveness. But I guess there wouldn't be much of a story without it.



Author's Response:

And damn my typos too (I think I caught them all). I should do a full edit before I post next time. 

I also second your damning of Meredith. 

Thanks.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2013 6:14 PM Title: Stormy Interlude

Something tells me all is not lost for our tiny lady...



Author's Response:

I haven't given anything away yet, despite what you read in the introduction. (Unlike Adela, I've got this whole story more or less finished -- just have to find time to write it down.)

Appreciate as always the review & rating.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 10:54 PM Title: Abigail

Ah another rebel young lady. It seems there is a bubbling issue here of the old guard ways vs the young fire.

 

Excellent read.



Author's Response:

Or, if you think of it another way, the new guard vs. the old tricks. Quickly realized that the categories I used in the last story don't have any meaning here: whether one is good or bad, or gentle or sadistic, it all comes out the same in a "dystopian" NWO scenario. Giving your character bad motives, or making them deliberately evil, isn't necessary, because in a bad world they're bound to pick up some of the ingrained practices of that world. Discrepancies or deficiencies of character can be explained away by: but you didn't consider the times they lived in. 

Now, when applied to a NWO giantess story, that makes the relationships 10x more interesting, at least for me. Some writers on this site know what I'm talking about, but others go on plugging away at the violent/gentle categories without realizing they're both unnecessary and ridiculous in many situations. 

Yes, a lot of little parodies in the last chapter, and not only of my own stories. But also there's this to remember: while the eponymous character of my earlier story might have had a personal, intergenerational grudge against her mother, she later became a leader in the society itself. 

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: ltltb Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 6:45 AM Title: Introduction

At last... glad to see this story continue!



Author's Response:

Thanks! -- Sorry for the wait.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2013 11:46 PM Title: Jennifer and Meredith

You had me worried!

 

*prepares to read more goodness*



Author's Response:

Thanks, & I'm glad to be back. Hope the story lives up to your expectations.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2012 7:12 PM Title: Introduction

 

The only reason why I just read this story was because I thought their would be more. I would love for u to continue if your up to it.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2012 10:25 PM Title: Introduction

A little late but wonderful to see you have continued this tale beyond Adela.

Reviewer: ltltb Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2012 3:54 PM Title: Introduction

A promising tale.

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