[Report This]Date: January 20 2013 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice work on the latest chapter, I like the fact that she actually has some tiny people she considers friends to an extent, and then turns around an massacres a whole lot of them just because. I think she is a good character and it seems that she has all this power and uses it on a whim but also wants to have friends that love her. Cant wait to see where you take this.
PS: Is she like a war with another god or something?
Author's Response:
You could say she is at war with... something. That I will of course releval as the story progresses. Also, just to be clear (since apparently I've not pointed it out clearly enoug), she can change sizes at will (sort of, it's more or less the central idea of this story). On the ship, when she talks with the commnader and walks around, she is normal sized like all others and the people she captured have been shrunken.
[Report This]Date: January 14 2013 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice work on the latest chapter, I do like this story, although Im more into the gentle stuff. I like the way she's teasing them with her piss, and I like the fact that you added some backstory to this, not many people care to flesh their stories out like this. Keep it up, I'll be reading!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I do find that adding a story makes inclined to write more, keeps you from constantly repeating the same things over and over. I wish I could write a more gentle, more personal story, but I seem to have passed that threshold a long time ago.
Date: January 14 2013 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice job on the latest chapter. Hope to see more!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. It seems like you're the only one who really cares to write something here. It looks people here don't really like stories that have lots of gruesome violence in them. I really don't get enough feedback to know if I'm doing a good job or not.
Date: December 27 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved chapter 3! The writing is good, and so is the story itself. Dont stop now!
Date: December 19 2012 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
HOLEY MOLEY BABY!!! This is GOOD, GREAT, EXCELLENT! Please continue this story. Don't stop only a few chapters in like many writers on this site seem to do. I'm sure it's hard to complete stories and obviously takes much dedication, but I am sure you are capable of it if you just keep at it! Anyways, such a thriller story! The only thing I might suggest is to please include more "singled out" scenarios, like that of the woman that was fighting for her life on the nipple. You are very good at those descriptive scenes. Maybe it's just me, but I find those small stories within the story to be HOT and full of sexy detail. Thanks for what you've wrote thus far. I really really enjoyed these first two chapters. Cannot wait to read more!!!!
Author's Response:
Well, I didn't expect such a good review. I obviously plan to complete this and if this is a success, to write a story about how it all began. I hope to add a new chapter every week or so, depending on how busy I am, but of course reviews such as this always encourage the writer.
Also, I think there will be a lot more 'singled out' scenarios in the next chapters since after the capital is destroyed, most of the population will disperse into rural areas out of fear, collapse of trade and general unrest. We have to wait and see :)
[Report This]Date: December 17 2012 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
A captivating story...
Usually, macro stories are pretty superficial; not holding my interest for very long. But this one is a very good story - lots of interest with a promiss of giantess sex thrown in. I'm really looking forward to its continuation.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it :)
Date: December 17 2012 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Have you downloaded either Office Libre or Open Office? They are free and you may prefer one of them to what you're using at the moment.
Author's Response:
I have MS Word, don't think I'll need anything more. I prefer Google Drive because I can write from anywhere and multiple PC-s.
Anyway, the bug is now fixed :)
[Report This]Date: December 17 2012 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is great, although im not sure why the second chapter needed to be in bold. But good start, and great descriptions I hope you finish this.
Author's Response:
It was not my intention to post it in bold, but this site's text editor just wouldn't let me unbold it. I'll try to fix it as soon as I can, but this must be a bug or something, since I'm writing my stories on google drive, and then just copy paste, the transfer must be causing something weird.
Date: December 17 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
I do like a lot of the descriptive language in this chapter although I'm wondering why you made the whole chapter have bold text. Also, is there is reason for all of this destruction?
Author's Response:
As I said in another reply, the text editor won't let me unbold the text for some reason, will try to fix it as soon as I can. And there is a pretty good reason for all this destruction, at least from the giantess' perspective. Let's just say that this story is more sci-fi than fantasy.
As for the descriptive language, I feel like it's still lacking since I just can't find the right words at times, I think I can do much better, but that will only improve as I keep writing.
Date: December 17 2012 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like the build up, although you need to work on your fortmatting. Your spelling is good but I would suggest looking at the "Writing Tools" section of giantessworld.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the advice. I'll definitely check that section again, it's been a while. Also I'll read other tips, re-read my story, spot my mistakes and improve, this is my main motivation for writing this story anyway.