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Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2012 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 7: Infidelity

 

the way u described her smelly feet almost seemed like the better choice. The one thing I like about your male characters the most is that I always hope the best for them. Thats why I loved the blackmailing series, after yrs of slavery something good finally comes. Stories about torture that leads to more torture never connect with me. I don't care wht anyone thinks this is a great story.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review! i like stories that have some kind of payoff for all the torture, too, so i often go for that scenario, although this particular character may still yet have some trials to go through

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2012 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 7: Infidelity

Another great chapter! I'm liking this character Janie, I wonder if she will return him or if Maggie will figure it out and come retrieve her toy. Curious to see if Gabby gets her hands on him too.

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