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Reviewer: Vord Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2013 1:11 AM Title: Gina

Pretty good story so far. I hope you'll have a chapter where it's dedicated to Michael and Jack's relationship to their sisters. I really like to see how Jazzmine feels about her tiny brothers and how Selena became sort of distant towards her 'little' brothers.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2013 7:02 PM Title: Gina

Whew! These additions were so good, I skipped right to this chapter following the cliff-hanger at the other one. That being said, I have to admit; you partially scared me there, with Jack's stowing away on Selena's shoe. I thought sure he was going blab the entire contents of the arguement, thereby nullifying Mike's wish. But, you proved me wrong. So, now we have only to see if Gina can be trusted.

Author's Response: I have to say, you really are a genius at predicting things. I mean figure out the possibilities before they even show up. Bravo my good sir. Also, thanks for commenting, good to know SOME people are still reading this.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2013 3:20 AM Title: Gina

I wonder how his first day will go. I hope he doesn't regret it. There are plenty of thing you can do when you are tiny. Like spying on the girls.

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