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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2014 8:17 AM Title: Familiar Territory

True love means _never_ having to brainwash your love interest. If sanity were beer, Maddison would definitely be five cans short of a six pack!

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2014 2:26 AM Title: Familiar Territory

Ha I knew Madison still loved him. She is so good at manipulating people also.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2014 9:25 PM Title: Familiar Territory

WOW! Maddison is fucking insane! And Franky is being broken down, bit by bit by her! I'm not so sure that Elise and the others should be getting involved without some outside help. Now I know this is a story, and the cops are generally useless in stories.

But if I was Elise I would AT least call the cops on Maddison with some BS story...We've all heard about people getting swatted and the cops busting in full-force and asking question later. NOW would be one of the times that being trigger-happy would help the situation immensely!

Great chapter by the way! I really feel for poor Franky, what Maddison said about him being betrayed before isn't exactly a lie either! None of this would have happened in the first place had Liza kept her end of the bargain like a decent person in the first chapter!



Author's Response:

Worry not, Elise and the gang are getting there gameplan together and I'd like to think normally they don't want legal officials getting involved because at that point after matters are resolved they'd be powerless at what the government would want to do with Franky.

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