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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2013 9:00 PM Title: Red Flag

Liza is now arrived at a moral crossroads.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2013 9:27 PM Title: Red Flag

I knew that Liza was related to Elise and Louise. And for some reason, it seemed like your sentences were split up at a lot of parts which made it really confusing to read at some points. Do you know why this happened?

But once I understood everything, it was an excellent chapter.



Author's Response:

Sorry the first part of that I wrote on notepad so when I pasted it into a spell checker the formatting probably got screwed up. Let me try to fix to make it a more readable.

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