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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2013 4:21 PM Title: Morning Prep

:-O

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2013 11:53 PM Title: Morning Prep

 

ohhhhhhhhhh shit, u know what would be perfect, maddison getting punched in the FACE. now im scared for our little hero

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2013 11:56 AM Title: Morning Prep

Here:

 I stared up to Elise's bright eyes who just kissed me.

It looks like the eyes are the ones doing the kssing.

The ending of the chapter made my heart beat a little faster. Good job.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 6:02 PM Title: Morning Prep

Kinda obvious this should happen. I can only imagine what comes next

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