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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2012 11:41 PM Title: Soups On

This story is really good. It grabbed my attention big time when Elise said her eldest daughter was one of the missing, an I cannot wait to see how this story takes place. But if I may, I'd like to present an idea. IMO it would be really cool if she was shrunk an brought back to her very loving family(much like he was found) but I'm probably just getting ahead of myself with my presumptuous way of thinking but in the end it's your story.

aaron

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2012 10:30 AM Title: Soups On

Yep! I was right. Now, I wonder if I'm right in predicting that the missing older daughter is L***?

;-)

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2012 6:54 AM Title: Soups On

I think Louise will turn out nice in the end. One can only hope.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2012 6:37 PM Title: Soups On

 

hmmm missing sister. good ch.

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