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Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20 2012 12:38 AM Title: Amy's day

Great story, hope you add more chapters soon.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2012 5:44 PM Title: Amy's day

Great story. Hope to see some interactions with him an the ladies though.

aaron

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2012 7:21 AM Title: Amy's day

Good story, but the chapters are too short.  I suggest you make them longer with more detailed description of people, environment, perceptions, thoughts, and feelings. Also try to advance the story more with each chapter.

 



Author's Response:

I'm working on it, kind of hit writers block though after firing out two full stories. :)

 

Reviewer: Mobster Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21 2012 11:27 PM Title: The beginning

MORE!!!!!

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