Reviewer: Archangel34 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24 2013 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 4

Amazing.....this is one of the few stories i've read on here that has taken a path from just being porn and actually having a compelling story. When Henry took Joy, I felt my stomach sink for her. You have done a great job of making me feel for your main character. well done.

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Reviewer: racheywriter899 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 4

great chapter i loved it i cant wait for more!!!