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Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14 2012 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 3

Good story. I like the fantasy setting and Joy's mistrust of the "giants." There's room for some interesting character development there. The new chapter was great. Really liked Joy's mishap in the slipper and the bathtub.

Reviewer: racheywriter899 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2012 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 3

wow!! i am so attached to this story! please update soon i cant stop reading and i want to know what happens! Amber seems like such a nice girl i wish Joy would stop doubtingher trust, i guess she cant help it she was brought up to hate the giants! again loving the story update soon!!!!!

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2012 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 3

Dream about the future? That was unexpected.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 3

Ah excellent chapter.

 

Really loved the entire scene from the foot entering the shoe till she was found and they have a nice demographic going on between them.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2012 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 3

 

ohhh secret power real nice. I like that u updated but it seemed like a long ch with little interactions between them. I kind of like the pet idea better, because that could at least give more master/pet interactions. 

Thats just me though, I love your stories and im confident that u will make this story great. I love F/F Thank you

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