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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2012 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 6

Here it says:

 "But now, two large naked feet the size of a small boat crashed into them..."

Though in the previous chapter you said each toe was the size of an elephant. How can her feet be the size of a small boat if each toe is the size of an elephant?

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