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Reviewer: Ace of Spades Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28 2013 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 3

Skylar is really nice!

Reviewer: Noki_tapis Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2013 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 3

At the time, an exelent story thank you very much, hope to read what's happening next

Reviewer: soniti54 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2012 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 3

This has great potential!

The mood was set very nicely, and the characters are both well defined and promising. The dialogue also flows very naturally which helps in their developement.

I'll look forward to future additions!

Reviewer: YellowBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 3

Excelent chapter! I can`t wait to see more!

Reviewer: Ace of Spades Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2012 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 3

Excelent chapter! I can`t wait to see more!

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