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Reviewer: 99rednexela Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2012 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 2

I would very much like to see this story continued. :)

Reviewer: Ace of Spades Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2012 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 2

The characters looks nice! Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2012 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 2

Good plot, I really like the Idea of All the women being sour towards men.  The way that he(Jake) wakes-up to find himself SHRUNK.  It's a really good storie- Can't wait to see what happens next!  KEEP GOING DUDE!

Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2012 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 2

Keep writing its looking good
Also gravitate torward some of those tags you used
Ex feet

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2012 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 2

Looking forward to seeing where this goes.  Please continue!

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