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Reviewer: Noodlefanboy25 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please keep the story going I enjoy this story a lot please keep writing it

Reviewer: Majewherp Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

U should put in more of his sister brook other then that its great

Reviewer: Some_Dude Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome story, keep going!

Reviewer: rygar300 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2013 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

I hope this story isnt over. Cant wait for the next update.

Reviewer: Coelestium Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2013 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome story, please continue!

Reviewer: Hansuke Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2013 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story!  Keep it up! :D  Ignore the douche bag who insulted you.  He was probaly just trolling you.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2012 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story. You need to update it because I think this is excellent. Hope you have time too...

Reviewer: BigJames Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

love the story so far cant wait ti see more

Reviewer: Mobster Signed [Report This]
Date: November 18 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

GREAT STORY!!! Could you put pictures of Brooke and Skylar?

Reviewer: microspec Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2012 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is really good.

can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Mobster Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love your stories but you can be a bit** about reviews. If your going to right a story finish it!!! Like the other one you haven't finished. I love those. But you are a bit**. Don't write I you won't finish it.

Reviewer: carpette12 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

i forgot to rate it good! =)

Reviewer: carpette12 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2012 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is a very good story! I guess it will get better after but it's a good start!!

continue! =)

Reviewer: Lil Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2012 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Keep in this way :D U're amazing good author :)

Reviewer: herbxredentor Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

great beginning, please keep writing.

Reviewer: R1111 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2012 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great so far! Keep it up

Reviewer: XxDoopexX Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2012 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story so far, I already don't like skyler but the rest I enjoy will you make him very slowly get bigger that would be a change something I haven't seen on here before.

Reviewer: sm7in Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2012 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like the three distinct ways you have set up for the family to interact with Jake. It's well written and I look forward to more of this story! Keep it coming!

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 13 2012 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

Not bad at all.  I enjoy the diversity of personalities you have here, and it's a fun set-up; I like the bug bite used as a jumping off point.  Be careful on proofreadings; the errors can be a little distracting in places, and you could probably still benefit from some more vivid descriptions and fluid conversations, but overall I like this.

Reviewer: johnny hopkins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2012 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

Your stories are the best, bring on the mom!!!

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