Date: February 22 2018 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I know im a few years late but I really liked this story. Not many stories that end with a happy ending. Im a sucker for stories where the characters love each other instead of the usual dominat/hate stories. Really enjoyed that the shrunken girls where forgiven and fell in love with the their new owners/lovers. Didn't see that ending coming better than expected.
Never too late! Thank you!
I've had other reviewers complain about AWBB being "nothing but sex." This site is about a sexual fetish! Why wouldn't there be sex?
If men suddenly became smaller than women, I could envision a few acts of hateful vengeance. But I can't imagine they would all turn into monsters. I think most would try to find a way to rebuild the world. They would want relationships with their tiny men. They would want to love and enjoy sex with their tiny men, especially after the Goddess upped their sex drives.
I think that if all the men got small, it would give the women a chance for a world with sexual fulfillment without fear. A fearless woman would feel very sexy.
I didn't see that ending coming either. I was ready to wrap up the story when the State gymnasts got shrunk and lost their identities. But it seemed too cruel. Looking back, I think it gave the University gymnasts... the ones whose boyfriends were stolen... the chance to "grow". They started out right after the Rebalancing hit with jealousy over their lost boyfriends, trying to get them back. In effect they were worried about scarcity of men and lovers. Then when they succeeded, and won their rivals as sex slaves, and saw their defeated enemies as human beings, they began to see their sexuality not as a thing of scarcity but a situation of abundance. Their bodies sprawled, large enough to take a tiny man and a tiny woman as lovers, and with enough passion left over to take a normal sized lover girl as well. They became generous, sharing their sex with their tiny boyfriends and their tiny rivals.
It is so fun so see these tiny girls, dead to the world, come back to live because the bodily fluids of the women who possessed them made them fall in love in spite of themselves.
Another theme I enjoyed writing about was tiny partners making love where none existed. Women have been forced to try to do this throughout history. The heroine of Arabian Nights had to tell her husband a story every night to keep him from killing her. She was forced into her situation but made something loving out of it, against all odds. I especially developed this theme with the man who was taken by Amber's mother. He didn't want a woman several years older to become his captor and his life, but fellow tiny Jason showed him how to make the most of it, and led him to fall in love with the woman who took him out of the big world.
Please take time to enjoy the other stories in the Rebalancing the Sexe series. I think you'll find a lot of love and a lot of happy endings!
Date: August 14 2015 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
After I finished reading this story, I immidiately started writing a fanfiction about it.
It's interesting to think about how society might change post rebalancing. I think the lesbians and gays would quickly become in charge of the new world (well besides the goddess).
I doubt that straight women have the attention span for poletics, or anything complex really. The straight women seem a bit too distracted by the attention they receive from little men to contribute to society in any way beyond simple labor.
I'ld like to post it to this site, with your permission.
I think that's phenomenal! I'm honored and gladly give my permssion. Can't wait to read your story! I really appreciate your getting into the consideration of how society would function after the ROS. Straight women would probably need a lot of attention from their men to get through the day, although size and numbers would probably give them a sort of power over other groups. (Of course, the men probably would consider politics beyond their sphere as well, as their world transforms and their workplaces become the secret places of their women's bodies.) Thank you!
Date: August 26 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
I thought this story was dead. I liked the first few chapters, but got turned off by nothing more than sex every chapter. Only character I honestly liked was Carmen, and she gets very little time on screen. But, I do love this at the same time, a light hearted story is needed once in a while.
I know it's not everybody's taste. But I like a lot of sex and intimacy in the Rebalancing of Sexes universe. Part of what I like about the stories is how men and women find their way back to sexuality after such a tumultuous event. Carmen is a great character and she unashamedly enjoys the power that comes from being so much taller than men (and a few women), and being able to literally enclose them in her underwear and her sex. Both powerful and playful, as well as lustful, she just seems born to be a giantess. She may figure in another plotline in the story later on.
Date: June 28 2013 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 20
My Lord. I need a cold shower after this chapter.
(Also, would you mind if I borrowed this idea, for some story, at some point down the line?)
I am honored by any and all arousal incited by my works. :) Here is where I'm kind of trying to add a new element into the story. The Goddess of Love doesn't want the State girls to wither and die. She wants them to be humbled and find new love in their humility and smallness. I am also trying to develop the concept of "emotional shrinking" first outlined in Chapter 18, where the men find themselves adapting to their new sizes by altering their personalities... some becoming playful like a puppy, others becoming brave and flirty explorers of the feminine mountains and canyons... all arriving at a worldview that centers on women in general and their own GTS in particular... and feeling fulfilled... not only coping with their new size and station... but feeling that life is good. As for borrowing the idea, I would absolutely say YES, and would gladly bring it into the Rebalancing series and canon if it fits. I can think of few writers who approach this at such a deep level, as I read the "Library" series.
Date: December 31 2012 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just started this series today but that's the best NWO scheme I've read. Totally amped to read the next chapters!
Thanks for the review and the 5 stars! It's part of a series called "Rebalancing the Sexes" and I hope you'll also check out and review the other stories in this series: "Rebalancing the Sexes", "Fear of Commitment" and "At the Feet of Our Wives."
Date: November 05 2012 2:58 AM Title: Chapters 15, 16 & 17
I have to apologize I did no think this would be a good story. I dont know wht it was but the name was too long or something. idk. This story is fantastic, I love everything about it. I love the connection between Amber and Jason. Hope to see more of their relationship unfold.
Thanks and I'm thinking about adding to their relationship and the others, and maybe moving a few around. Please check out the other stories in the "Rebalancing the Sexes" series!
Date: November 04 2012 5:20 PM Title: Chapters 15, 16 & 17
The end or not, I would still give this concluding chapter half a dozen stars, if the moderators permitted it.
Thanks for your good words. I am thinking about how to continue the story, now that the State gymnasts are but toys in three different threesomes.
Date: October 29 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 11
OMG. The last three or four chapters have been so fantastically twisted, I'm reminded now and then, with some of these images, of the first time I read/saw a gts story or picture. (Isn't that what every writer is trying to do, in any genre? get back to that feeling of seeing it all for the first time. Pretty tough to accomplish, but sometimes it clicks.)
Really loving this so far.
Thanks... you've summed it up so well. That's so much of what I'm trying to achieve, the feeling of raw yet unjaded sexuality, and the expression of power in a feminine way. Giving these women the feeling that almost anything is possible and almost anything is permissible. But in a playful sort of way, a needful way.
Date: October 29 2012 8:09 AM Title: Chapters 9 & 10
Talk about feminine logic! When it comes to sisters, they can't stand to have their fathers not love them, equally. But, when it comes to an un-related/non-attached single male, he _has_ to choose a favorite!
And, my folks wonder why I'm still not married. Silly them!