Date: February 20 2016 4:27 AM Title: Irregular Checkup
Very well done I enjoyed Miss Taylor and the way she took control. A kid would see things differently than an adult. Dr. Penne was awesome. The measuring, the weighing, and the inspecting were all great. I thought she might have tested his blood. Very well written by the way. He has no choice but to depend on the kindness of everyone. I would think a few more yes Ma'ams are in order to diffuse potential situations.
Excellent,
Diesel
[Report This]Date: February 18 2016 9:47 PM Title: Irregular Checkup
You never cease to amaze me with this story! The scene with Amelia in the doctor's suit was very well transitioned! Will we see Cristina become his pseudo mother? Will he one day become microscopic? Can't wait to see!
5 gold stars!
-DrumGuy
Author's Response:
Maybe, maybe not! But, we're reaching a point where Matthew can no longer ignore his shrinking or shrug off what's been happening and now it's hit home how challenging normal life would be for him now. His mistrust for Dana has left him wondering about what the doctor said. Shit's going to get a lot weirder for Matthew soon.