Date: September 28 2015 1:42 PM Title: Office Run In
Wow, a deal with the devil. Nice idea. Enjoying the story very much. I would have liked more interaction with Candace. I am surprised that at his size he doesn't address her as Ms. Candace. Looking forward to seeing more of where you are going with this. So far it is well done and interesting.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thanks, we're just about at the point where things are going to get drastically worse as Matthew shrinks, so there will definitely be more moments with Candace involved. As of the end of this chapter 5 I have his height at 4'0. Right now I just want him to have some moments with the main characters since right now he still has moderate sovereignty over his life. As he continues to lose height and things spiral way beyond his control he'll have some far more interesting interactions with people.
Date: September 27 2015 6:30 PM Title: Office Run In
Great chapter! Its funny, but despite how emasculated he must feel, most people in his life seem to be treating him better at his new size.