[Report This]Date: October 24 2020 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 33: GIVE HER AN INCH AND...
Came here for the vore and got a good story.... With less than decent vore. The story telling is entertaining, but alittle scattered to where it feels like i must switch gears between chapters. And if i were to rate the vore parts compared to others out there, it would be a solid 5.5 out of 10.
Author's Response:
That's a true and accurate assessment of this story.
Unlike some of my stuff, this as you say, doesn't have any concentrated vore, as I developed a lot of character dynamics along the way to fill up the pages.
Date: November 03 2012 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 33: GIVE HER AN INCH AND...
Great story-telling, as always.
Author's Response:
And I'd just like to say (comedy store drum beats here), "You've been a great audience!"
[Report This]Date: November 03 2012 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 33: GIVE HER AN INCH AND...
And, thus, ended his last "Ray" of hope.
Author's Response:
Or perhaps I should have said, of the previous review "It's not DRY humour."