[Report This]Date: September 23 2012 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am enjoying this story. The idea that the scent is causing him to shrink is like an idea I've toyed with in stories, too. In my fantasy, the smell of the girl's feet causes shrinkage, including the feeling of humiliation. I'm hoping that while he is attracted to scent at this point, that he comes to deeply regret it as he's around an inch tall. Of course, I prefer dark stories and want him to become crushed psychologically and emotionally at this girls' monstrous feet!
Author's Response:
Thanks. I don't want to reveal just how dark or not the story will be, or how the characters' feelings will change, because I think a lot of the fun in a story that makes you want to keep reading is seeing the tone evolve. Joe is definitely, in his rational mind, ashamed of how he feels about her scent. I hope I got that across clearly enough in the chapter.
I remember reading your story a while ago and enjoying it, despite not usually being in the mom-son gts stories.
[Report This]Date: September 23 2012 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Best image 4ft Joe kneeling at Alexs feet worshipping them. picture it u love it dont you lol.
Author's Response:
Believe me, I've spent a lot of time over the years imagining this scenario with tons of different girls, lol.
[Report This]Date: September 22 2012 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
My favorite story so far.....and I have read alot of these stories haha. You did such a good job setting up a gentle girl, but ditzy enough to get him into some great situations that I can't wait to read about. The hygiene and sweat is such a good idea, especially when writing a giantess/shrinking story. Keep up the good work, can't wait till the next chapter!
~Mymiridion~
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you for the very high praise. I've read a lot of stories here and elsewhere too and I wouldn't consider mine to rank very highly, but thank you!
[Report This]Date: September 20 2012 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
u should keep in gentle/kind because the way u described it is that she wont be sadistic. thx for answering now i know more about alex. It would be cool/helpful to get a ch. from alex's pov. God I cant wait for more!:)
Date: September 18 2012 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful start! Slow shrink is my fav, and the shy flirting between the characters is great! Cant wait for more =)
Author's Response:
Thanks. I was hoping I didn't overdo it with some of the dialogue. I'll finish the next part soon hopefully and it will get more interesting.
[Report This]Date: September 18 2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds promising!
Author's Response:
Thanks for seeing some potential in it. I wrote this kind of rushed in spurts. This is the first story I've ever actually sat down and wrote and a major reason for that is I really dislike planning and writing beginnings. So if it wasn't too excruciating so far that's all I can ask for.